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Light In My Dreams

"I shall be telling this with a sigh" Robert Frost, The Road Less Travelled. ~ I had a mother once With long dark hair Whose candle faded, but not her flame The light she left inside my heart Is still alive, forever glowing It flickers softly in the dark It chases shadows from my dreams And comforts me, and softly keeps me warm and safe, and whispers love that does not leave me It somehow knows when darkness swallows me that soon the blush of morning follows It tucks me in, and lightens my dread and with warm breath, will kiss my head Then tells me "Hush, hush little sweet one...., ...go back to sleep"
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ In honor of Constance's Contest: "Give Me a Kiss, Mommy" By Carrie Richards 10/6/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/26/2011 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Any Mother Poem" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Warm memories. Great tribute to a great lady. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:28:00 PM
I love this. Did she ever come to know white hair or did she die young, Carrie? Great ending on this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/24/2011 8:54:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on a wonderful win with this tremendous write for the contest luv.. truly tender..
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Date: 10/24/2011 5:58:00 PM
We're always our mothers' little ones. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/24/2011 4:26:00 PM
Awesome write,Carrie.wonderful piece of work.Congrats on your win....
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Date: 11/22/2009 11:11:00 PM
Ahhh...precious memories! Love this tender little poem, Carrie. Sounds almost like a lullabye! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/21/2009 4:40:00 AM
Lovely and very beautiful. Blessings of parents are the most precious wealth any one can have. You reminded me of my mother whom I lost long back. She always inspired me and still is the source of my inspirations. Thanks for a good reading. My best wishes for you, Ravindra
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Date: 11/13/2009 11:20:00 AM
i love this poem and thanx for the comment on my heavenly mother poem
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:32:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:51:00 PM
I just posted tribute poem for u... I luv this poem as I commented on it yesterday... it makes me well up with emotions...thankxxx Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/12/2009 12:37:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:00:00 AM
Although I have no children of my own. I have three sisters much younger than I, Two more older sister, that have children. Two older brothers that have children, and two more younger brothers.... Needless to say I have a large fam, and they always like to use me for their escape.... I am good with it though... I love my fam........:JP]
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Date: 11/12/2009 12:06:00 AM
The longlasting love of a mother Carrie.Well penned.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/11/2009 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful words Carrie, great job on this remarkable piece...Raul
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Date: 11/11/2009 10:03:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, Carrie. I still had a mother four and a half years ago. I miss her so much. I just had a dream and she visited me and made me sleep like a baby. My latest poem is about that tragic event four years ago. It's called "Roulette". Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/11/2009 7:39:00 PM
OH Carrie.. this hit home for me.. on Thanksgiving Day 17 years ago my MOM passed away and its still like yesterday and your poem touched me so deeply.. wonderful tribute to your Mom and all Moms everywhere who have passed on to a higher form of life... u may like to read my poems "Metamorphosis" "Empty Tomb" and "A Mother's Ways" or "In Memoriam" .. all tributes to my precious Mom... great composition .. luv it... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:45:00 PM
This is very nice Carrie...enjoyed very much...Marty
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Date: 11/11/2009 2:34:00 PM
Beautifully written Carrie. A mothers love always lives within us even long after her tracks can no longer be seen. They're always felt. Hugs, Love Patty
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:16:00 PM
Who is more precious than a mother,,nobody,,Mum is always Mun,so beautiful Carrie--Charma
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