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Light Breaks Through the Mist

Light breaks through the mist, as its splendid rays filter into the pine grove... I sit underneath these illuminated trees, and behold glory... Entered in Raul Moreno Ascension contest. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/18/2009 10:12:00 AM

Very nice Haiku. I love the imagery which is easy to picture. Goodluck on the contest and thank you for sharing. Caroline.

Date: 11/18/2009 8:11:00 AM

You captured the essence of the picture quite nicely in this poem. Good use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/18/2009 7:57:00 AM

A perfect description of the wonderful photo! Well done! ~ Carrie

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/18/2009 1:19:00 AM

You selected a beautiful subject. Its my favourite thing to enjoy the beauty of light coming out of misty clouds. But your poem is very short try to complete the full sketch. Still it is nice- Best wishes Ravindra