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On New Year's day, I heaved with scale of ten gut pain

In Cape Fear hospital, several tests

At discharge two days later; they wrote: elevated lipase (can cause liver damage)

Pancreatic division.

Haiku #13,005-13,010.......................................Light and Love Illuminates One resolution Smart measure, full screen intake Trinity means love. From morn till night, light Soft potent gems beckon us Main ingredient, love. Nutrition is gem Light, airy rejuvenates Strong ever ready. Old friend is light weight As jogger I'll glide through air Steel stole feather's joy. I feel glow of light Frame pictures of healing light Silent New Year's gift. A heavy laden gut The weight of a heavy heart All time thief of our joy. *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/28/2016 6:48:00 PM
Hi Iris, i do love the Haiky form and this set of Haiku deserves a seven rating and a fav. Each one is special in its own way. I Love them all. An excellent work. Well written Haiku'....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/29/2016 5:25:00 AM
Thanks Vlad. I thought them up while in the hospital; sensing I needed a life style change because of pancreatic pains.
Date: 1/17/2016 6:23:00 PM
I enjoyed this set, Iris. I especially could relate to the last one, my favorite!! Hope 2016 is amazing for you.
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:45:00 PM
Hi Iris, Everyone needs Love, I like the words Trinity very much. The end of this poem is deep. The old rise to see joy when reborn. Thank you for the read. SKAT
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:48:00 PM
I feel for you..I hope that you can get your health back on a good plan for this New Year..You can do it..It just takes a little effort..Don't let the devil steal your joy..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:56:00 AM
great expressions, wrote it right
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