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Light and Life

Flickering drama The candle sighs... Diminished Time can't hold its breath

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Date: 11/3/2023 12:28:00 AM
Such a dramatic, wonderfully written Senryu Chris. Love the choice of your skilfully chosen words. ‘ Time can’t hold its breath’ - what a line! Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend. :):)
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Chris Con
Date: 12/6/2023 10:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 9/22/2023 5:04:00 AM
Wow! A powerhouse!
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Chris Con
Date: 10/5/2023 5:37:00 PM
You're too kind. Thank you.

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