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Light 1

Light

Poets contemplated LIGHTso deep
Their repertoire had such a sweep
Though many were trite.

Physics went into a tizzy
Light's dual nature so fuzzy
Light was not that light.

01/Dec/12
Form: Tail rhyme (  Two 3 line stanzas; Syllbls:8,8,<8/8,8,<8;  Rhyme Sch:a-a-b, c-c-b)

For: Debbie’s Kindle the lights contest

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest Jag. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:58:00 PM
    nice win~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:03:00 PM
    Love this!! Fantastic win in Debbie’s contest

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Nice and lovely Tail-rhyme,SJ...Congrats on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:42:00 AM
    Goodmorning! Thanks so much for writing for my contest! Glad to see a different take on LIGHT. Congrad's on your winnning entry. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:10:00 AM
    Great write and many congratulations on a well deserved win, Jag!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:54:00 AM
    Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:47:00 AM
    Congrats on your fine win friend S.J. cheers!! Maria

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:37:00 PM
    My big congratulations on your awesome win, S.J! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:54:00 PM
    congrats Jag on an incredible write and big win luv .. great one ..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Congratulations Jag, another well deserved win with this one xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:46:00 PM
    Good play on words and thoughts. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:46:00 PM
    JAG, ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:25:00 AM
    Let all the light shine .... lovely written Jag. - Good luck in the contest. - Wishing you a good and peaceful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)