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Life's Your Dream

You go to bed, your curfew long past. Your mind is so tired, yet moving so fast. Your thoughts have no certain themes, Just creativity in your quixotic dreams. Adventures from close and far, beyond the Milky Way and past the stars. Where you fight pirates, in the heat or the cold, And slide down rainbows to find your pot of gold. You dreams are powerful, they make you strong. But when you wake up Your dreams are all gone. Now take a second and think, What if you still really are asleep? What if your dreams were just a buildup, For when you really woke up. Has life passed me by? Have I ever really spoken the words hello and goodbye? Have all these years been not what they seem? I guess I’ll never know, if I am awake, Or if my life has all been a dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/11/2016 2:58:00 PM
Nice one Gwynne, nice imagery with lovely rhyme, inspiring indeed!
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Date: 7/4/2016 11:13:00 PM
Gwynne:), Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/3/2016 8:11:00 PM
Gwynne,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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