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Life's Path

It’s an open ended kind of life; I know not where I go. I hold you close inside my heart; I know you’re in the show. I see behind me clear as day, but forward dark as night. I know I love you come what may, but there is no foresight. There is no map or plan ahead I’m strictly walking blind. I have no future thoughts off hand; I hope you do not mind. Sometimes I feel as if I’ll fall if I don’t turn to light. But always know that you are there to catch me in mid flight. So yes sometimes I am afraid I have no future plans. But one thing is clear for all my life I’ve had your helping hands.

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Date: 2/1/2012 6:52:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Kirstie. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2008 4:21:00 PM
This is very beautiful and uplifting. So much gentleness. Congratulations on being featured. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/23/2008 3:45:00 PM
Hi dear Kristie I truly enjoyed this poem. Great rhythem and rhyme. Your words seems to flow effortesly which makes this peice a joy to read. Congrats on your feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/22/2008 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Kirstie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2008 5:35:00 AM
The flow to this read seems so natural and fluid while the sentiment of the write comes through with honesty and great clarity. Very well written and congratulations on your feature. Michael
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:15:00 AM
Beautiful ending - rhyme and flow were very well done - congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/21/2008 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Kirstie, on "Life's Path" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/20/2008 5:38:00 PM
Hi sweet Kirstie. Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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