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Life's Next Tune

Oh just like a winding river, blue notes trickle down and streams along the ocean where they were heard all around. unique each in their tempo sailing in a whirl of life's dance; with distinct flow in sweet motion to be adorned as one long song. Still a rhapsody has its fading as with a prelude there must be an end, like seasons with ellipses that pause only to open new lilts of fresh cycle; my passages turning into another tune awaiting the chances of a river's journey to sail and be taken away by its flow. Mood Music Contest

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Date: 2/26/2014 9:30:00 PM
Carly, thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/25/2014 9:42:00 AM
impressive, carly.. go and win more, more... sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 2/24/2014 4:00:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,carly
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Date: 2/24/2014 12:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carly--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your happy sway. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:57:00 AM
I really enjoyed this! "sailing in a whirl of life's dance;", "only to open new lilts of fresh cycle;".. Powerful!!Asavvy1
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