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Life's Love Story

Written for the contest MORE SONG LYRICS Have you ever seen, the sun setting down Upon this red roofed town And hear the sound of love begin I have never found a more perfect place Than, when I see your face I simply fall in love again Don't ask me which way the wind will blow Or the tide will flow Or even where, our love will go I just know there could never be a place Where I can’t feel your warm embrace With those lips I love to taste Have you seen the mountains rising from the sea That’s where I want to be With you eternally, in grace We hear our tune, carried along the wind Strummed on life’s violin As a tear rolls down your face Don’t ask me why the good times seem to fly Or why some passion dies, Or how lovers, can say Goodbye All I know is when I leave this tropic heat I am filled with the Latin beat Until the next time on this street, we meet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/3/2014 12:15:00 PM
- Jerry, this is so beautiful to read ...... - Glad I stopped by - I see that is a winning poem .... CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:26:00 AM
Jerry that's a beautiful song! Perfect inspiration, Congrats on huge win!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2014 5:30:00 PM
You know I meant Upma---those crazy fingers !
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2014 5:29:00 PM
Thank you Dr Upam
Date: 9/2/2014 5:14:00 AM
A Great win. congrats , Jerry
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2014 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram
Date: 9/1/2014 7:30:00 PM
Awesome, Jerry. This is a new favorite for me! Congratulations on writing the perfect lyrics for Craig's contest. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2014 6:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Carolyn
Date: 9/1/2014 6:06:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/2/2014 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Debbie, I have to say, all the entry's seemed great.
Date: 9/1/2014 4:46:00 PM
awesome win. I am glad to finally read this poem /song that you wrote for those wonderful notes of jazz! congrats on your win.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 9/1/2014 2:04:00 PM
excellent. congratulations this a well earned win.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2014 5:19:00 PM
Thank you Maurice for taking the time to read this and for your kind comment
Date: 9/1/2014 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations and well done Jerry. I could sing as I read it.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2014 5:20:00 PM
and I bet you sound beautiful
Date: 9/1/2014 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations Jerry for your first place win for this beautiful poem. Verlena
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2014 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Verlena, your comment meant a lot to me
Date: 8/31/2014 7:18:00 AM
HI....lovely! I did read Craig's blog on this...and the response by the musician! Awesome! Yes...never underestimate your own work.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 8/31/2014 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 8/23/2014 7:08:00 PM
This is very beautiful. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece... Lucilla
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Date: 8/22/2014 8:12:00 PM
This has a great flow, and I like the imagery!
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