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This urge to exhale without restraint into the softness and hardness of days heightens; my own center accepting those lapses when our frail bodies can readily perish amidst borrowed seasons : yes, you are weary; How mournful the thieving of dear life rips, as I blame the ticks which pluck you from a bed of courage, from untold confessions--- a final rest grabbing you before me. Yet, holy moments past relieve love's woe, and grant your finality its closure: I envy the winds holding you more than my arms could ever seize -- that forever reigns beyond illness, beyond earthly limitations: Somehow, intimacy becomes part of separation. Brian's E Contest

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Date: 6/8/2020 1:28:00 PM
Everyone is limited by the borders of their own mind. As the world turns, borders expand! Keep smiling; tomorrow is another day filled with adventures into the unknown! Aloha! Rico
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