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Life's Like That

Life is slowly pinning me down, sharp shards of attachment attack by mobility. Treadmill of progression that strengthens me to stay. as my legs stagnate my mind grows. I guess I could move forward, towards, ahead, but I am not ready to leave it all behind. You’ve clipped my wings; the circumstance of you has pulled me unwarily from the sky. Into you lap of comfort, where I remain uncomforted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/9/2010 11:06:00 AM
i think u have talent. love your work. best to you.....
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Date: 10/13/2009 1:28:00 PM
sure is a shame to have that happpen but you can always grow!
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Date: 9/10/2009 10:30:00 AM
I do not have a verse for my dialect contest with a Canadian dialect .....aye? You won't want me to have to reserect the American spoof of Canadians would you? Remember those "hosers?" LOL PLEASE write me a verse for the contest! on this verse BOY do I hear you especially the last line!
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Date: 8/8/2009 2:24:00 AM
Very cleverly written. Move forward slowly everyday don't stagnate but be careful of others. Sara
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:09:00 PM
Indeed, comfortability sometimes brings us down...Comfortably Numb @.@ jojojo nice idea sir, thanks a lot for the experience =D=D wiii
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Date: 7/31/2009 7:09:00 AM
Life can indeed be this way for some Robert. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2009 3:52:00 PM
Interesting writing. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:51:00 PM
accurate description of life sometimes!
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