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Life's Joy and Pain

In Life that runs has Lamp that burns its light not seen its heat felt keen a heat when warm makes Life a charm a feel so sweet mind loves to meet I seek this more my sprits go soar joy soon to end out goes warm friend a knot of pain takes root to strain I hate this state I call this fate Lamp is in flame I pass the blame why me to task why me I ask for long this was for now it is Time heals my pain my mind turn sane Joy and pain twin teach how to win they don’t come free makes Life its fee both come and sit means Lamp is lit Twin leaves its clout when Lamp burns out. 03-Feb-2018 Contest: 128 words 4 words per line all 1 syllable each. So 4 syllables per line.32 line poem, so in total 128 words. Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:39:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Sathya - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Sathya Babu
Date: 2/16/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Gregory for the visit and your Blessings. Regards,Sathya
Date: 2/6/2018 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations Sathya on your wonderful win with your lovely and meaningful poem. ~Susan
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Date: 2/7/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thank You so much Susan. Thanks for the visit :-) Regards,Sathya
Date: 2/5/2018 12:57:00 PM
Your words are filled with imagery. The simplest words say a lot and convey meaning within their reading. The delivery and the flow smoothly carrying a thought to completion within its structure. Perfect! Emile.
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Emile. Regards,Sathya
Date: 2/5/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Sathya!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 2/5/2018 11:31:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Eve
Date: 2/5/2018 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win.
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Sathya Babu
Date: 2/5/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Subimal Regards, Sathya
Date: 2/4/2018 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Sathya.
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Sathya Babu
Date: 2/5/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot Line......Regards,S athya
Date: 2/4/2018 3:27:00 PM
Great take on the contest Sathya.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Sathya Babu
Date: 2/5/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks a Lot SO. I enjoyed participating in this contest.....

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