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As we journey through life we seek to understand With great strides of ambition our roads we expand Our paths may narrow when we tire with strife At the crossroads of hope we begin a new life We ask, who we are and where we fit in Fulfilling our life’s journey, with guidance from Him. March 22, 2022 For: J –Just Write Me a New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme: Journey Placed 2nd in contest Placed 2nd in contest

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Date: 3/27/2022 7:43:00 PM
Daily, " We ask, who we are and where we fit in" and sometimes hourly! Congratulations on your win!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/28/2022 4:53:00 AM
LOL! Truth be told, as long as we are evolving, aren’t we always asking ourselves the question of where we fit in? :)Paulette
Date: 3/27/2022 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations Paulette, on your win. Outstanding poem. Blessings ~ Debra Reply
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Date: 3/27/2022 7:14:00 AM
Debra thank you for stopping by with an "Outstanding" comment. :)Paulette
Date: 3/26/2022 6:51:00 PM
Paulette, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/27/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Constance~I am so pleased to be a part of the winning entries. Blessings,Paulette
Date: 3/25/2022 7:43:00 PM
This is lovely Paulette!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/27/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Jim~
Date: 3/25/2022 11:28:00 AM
Our journey to where and how we fit in can be long but rewarding, congrats on your win!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/25/2022 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Michelle~ glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 3/25/2022 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Loved your true ending. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/25/2022 3:50:00 PM
Hi Paula~and congratulations to you too with your Lemon Cake Journey....very clever. Thanks for stopping by to comment on my write, glad you like it. :)Paulette
Date: 3/24/2022 9:40:00 PM
"We ask, who we are and where we fit in" - True. These questions unknowingly fill our minds. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/25/2022 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj for your gracious comments. :)Paulette
Date: 3/24/2022 6:17:00 PM
At the crossroads of hope, one hopes that hope didn't 'go that-a-way!' ~ Thumbs pointing east-west
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/25/2022 8:54:00 AM
Hi Gershon, thanks for commenting ... there is always hope! Take Care, Paulette
Date: 3/24/2022 4:12:00 PM
I can see you were on a pensive journey when you wrote this, been missing you, hope all is well my friend, hope to hear from you soon, much love vie :)
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/25/2022 8:54:00 AM
Dear Vie, thank you for your concern~life takes us all on a unchartered path. Thanks for commenting. See you soon. XO Paulette
Date: 3/23/2022 2:32:00 PM
A lovely uplifting piece Paulette, superbly penned.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/25/2022 8:52:00 AM
Gordon, thank you for stopping by with such 'uplifting' comments. :)Paulette
Date: 3/23/2022 6:55:00 AM
Yes! Uplifting is write on! Good work Paulette!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 3/25/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Jim~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

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