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Life's Driven Road

Where does one start a journey, a journey to their where Whilst a peripheral life abounds, in continual I don't care On their journey of ones life, no mediation to reason Whilst in the depths of married life, can lie continual treason For in these continual lies, no care to their past It's the path of life's driven road, that ends their starting last <*>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2013 7:06:00 PM
I really loved the fourth line of this one...great poem...Im fairly new here on soup and glad I discovered ya...Donna
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:38:00 PM
Sometimes life issues out some hard knocks..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it..Thanks for stopping by..You comment is appreciated..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2012 7:03:00 PM
Well written and thought provoking write James. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "A Road Still Driven" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2012 1:03:00 AM
A well and may I say roundly explained Write James...)
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Date: 12/11/2012 3:09:00 AM
Well penned James! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:22:00 AM
Congratulations James , nice to see you here again as well as in the winning circle xx
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:14:00 PM
James, it is nice to see you on Michael's winning list... a warm congratulations and good night~:-) PD
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Date: 12/10/2012 6:12:00 PM
Hope you're having a great holiday season Jamie! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/10/2012 4:02:00 PM
Congrats James on your win in my contest... Santa Michael
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Date: 12/6/2012 9:12:00 PM
It's sure nice to come upon this one. LONG TIME NO SEE< James. What have you been up to?? WEll, I think your poem here is going to do splendidly in the contest, anyway, I hope so. It's always hard for me to get a win with this judge, but I think this poem can get one from him!
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/10/2012 4:03:00 PM
Sorry you feel that way Andrea... I judge blind ....sorry
Date: 12/6/2012 10:38:00 AM
I do wish you a life driven with beautiful moments.Reality carries all type of emotions but im sure if we.dig deep thete are petals with each thorn.keep writing james.Did you hear from carolyn and james p?its been awhile
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Date: 11/30/2012 4:50:00 PM
Your journey in life begins the day you are born, James. - I do not think it's fate that determines your life, it's what we do out of our lives.- well written James. Wishing you a good and restful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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