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Life's Devastation

Life is a Devastation upon request, When you live each moment like the rest. Trying to fit in, Wearing a mask, It's killing you inside, You have nowhere to hide. As your heart falters, And your breathing stops, You fall into the dark abyss. Not knowing what's on the otherside, Not caring 'cause you have died. Goodbye light, Hello darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2010 3:46:00 PM
Brittany u should make this form an Elegy and submit it to Dr. Ram's new contest posted on the contest page.. its about life and death and sadness too.. good luck if u do.. with luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 5:30:00 AM
Another day of fasinating reading ahead of me I see. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Brittany. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:34:00 PM
Hello Britany, how are you. nice to see you post.. Very strong Brittany, why the abyss is it the school and the peeps around you dread. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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