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Lifelong Journey

The clouds in the sky Pouring droplets as we walk by Couldn't we just comprehend guy What is it that drives us by Down,down,down Drown,drown,drown I'm fast sinking in the ocean's lawn Couldn't help but fell to the ground In the ocean of loves crown Couldn't you feel my impression Or you just see my distortion Have a feel at my emotion In the ocean of loves in motion You and I walking this distant life Just trying to understand it's dice The great nature of this land undispice For you,for me,for us,to pay the price Yet it seems so far You and me a distant bar Couldn't we do it at par So that we could be a little star And be a little bit wiser So that life could be a little bit better Don't want to be a trendsetter But just want a tranquil life that's greater What is it that triggers our insanity Could we cool it off to have a longevity Just to be a little bit in vanity For you,for me, for us, to see it's rarity

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Date: 2/26/2016 6:09:00 PM
zainal hamidon, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:37:00 PM
ZAINAL, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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