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It was fleeting The connection made I am sure you felt it too In between the laughter of others Your eyes held mine I was challenged I wanted to stare you down Instead you kept the pace Without breaking a sweat You told me then Just like you are doing now With your eyes This is not fleeting It is long-lasting ©130720161347 *lunch time random thoughts*

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Date: 8/6/2016 1:34:00 AM
So wats die storie oor die lunch breaks? Die gedig is vol elektrisiteit. Oh Mama
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Wilma Neels
Date: 8/8/2016 6:05:00 AM
lmk Jannie, ek sien nou eers jou comment. Nee niks nie jong. Was seker net vervelig :)
Date: 7/24/2016 5:36:00 PM
Oh, I love this . Your random thoughts are marvelous, Wilma!! And a fave
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Date: 7/19/2016 1:31:00 PM
Nice one Wilma, superbly penned with great line of thought, hope having blessed day , Gordon
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Date: 7/17/2016 6:47:00 AM
This is beautiful Wilma..
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Date: 7/13/2016 10:24:00 PM
This is cool, Wilma! Love your random thoughts!
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Date: 7/13/2016 5:13:00 PM
wilms, i was hooked by this tantalizing write!.. eyes say it all!..huggs
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