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Line after line of fresh diapers A daily chore for years Clotheslines held six dozen each day Unless weather unclear Two little ones not potty trained Now grown and on their own They hold up a lifeline of love Since the soft nest they've flown Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest: Let Me Feel Your Lines # 3. Clothesline Written by: Sara Kendrick March 30, 2015

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Date: 5/17/2015 1:14:00 AM
A kind of imagery enacting an objective, very impressive write and awe-inspiring. Congratulations, Sara. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:18:00 PM
Wonderful write, Sara, congratulations on your win a 7, hugs
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:41:00 AM
Lovely write Sara , Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:35:00 AM
Such a nice take on the theme, Sara. Reminds one of parent's accounts of how they used 100% cloth diapers for us. Congratulations! Kim
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:03:00 PM
Very clever take on this subject. Congrats my dear. BG
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:41:00 PM
Sara :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/14/2015 6:33:00 PM
Yes, you have imaged those days so well, Sara. Don't see these lines much anymore. I enjoyed your poem, and congrats for your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:21:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/14/2015 10:43:00 AM
Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:56:00 AM
I love this one! I well remember the cloth diaper days with twins!
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Date: 4/1/2015 2:58:00 PM
- A great poem ! - Dear Sarah, I wish you and your family a blessed Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2015 6:31:00 PM
you did excellently with this one, making it more than just about a clothesline. Mine is just for humor. I hope she likes both of our poems!!
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:45:00 PM
Sara, this is so nice, I really like your poem, A7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting, illuminating. . .
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Date: 3/31/2015 7:43:00 AM
Beautiful, nostalgic lines, Sarah. Full of love...A 7. Blessings for the contest. Hugs! Kim
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:06:00 AM
G'day Sara... close to a nostalgic poem Sara. Nappies are thrown away these days, but of course true nostalgia is with who the nappies wrapped. Thank you Sara - Lindsay
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:45:00 PM
Cute...good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 5:21:00 PM
oh how I remember this one - delightful write - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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