Life Within

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Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/11/2012 10:38:00 PM

Great stuff...enjoy this kinda deep write. BTW thanks a lot for all your nice comments...appreciated much!...goodnight & take care.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2012 8:48:00 PM

James, life well lived.. your imprints will always remain... I'm actually happy to be here tonight Jim.. Hopefully I find time to be myself next week or so.. You're always so kind. I also want to thank you for also understanding my growing ways here on the soup. have yourself a great night... xox~pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2012 12:49:00 PM

I really like this. Solace mixed with passion!

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/27/2012 4:16:00 PM

Excellent use of this form. A lot said in just a few words. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

David Smalling

Date: 5/25/2012 1:09:00 PM

If enemies burn there Then we may laugh, for thing I forgot Was that long tear I shed for the writhing moth ... When it was still The stillness solaced me. Tears are hot. Great write, Jimbo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2012 5:57:00 AM

Enjoyed your memory lane..Great work..Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 4/15/2012 7:25:00 AM

Curt, yet full of vision dear poet ! And to still be where one was raised as a child must be a wonderful feeling ! Awesome write Mr. Goff ! Have a wonderful weekend sir....much love, james