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Life Used To Be Slower

Here I lie watching clouds roll by It's now a big blur, can't focus my eyes Life used to be slower We were rolling in clover Took time to enjoy it as the years passed us by © Jack Ellison 2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/5/2015 8:47:00 AM

What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share

Donna Jones

Date: 12/1/2015 9:46:00 PM

Takes more effort just to roll over!....hey you! Have missed ya....stopped by for a giggle...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2015 7:43:00 AM

Donna Donna Donna!!! It's been too long... what happened? We shall fix it... love and big squeezy hugs!!!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/1/2015 4:43:00 PM

The days were slow and tranquil....for that we were so thankful...wore no socks...doors no locks....to go back I think I will

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2015 7:44:00 AM

See ya there, Mr. Tim!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/1/2015 4:26:00 PM

Life rolls by... Oh me! Oh My!... It really does know how to fly... But I will never be seen to cry... Cause I too see the past in the clouds in the sky...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2015 7:44:00 AM

Dreamers???? YUP xxx