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Life Today

I just don't understand what is happening these days Life has us turned around in so many ways Was it like this when I was small? Or does it happen when you grow tall? Is it the phones and computers that run our life? That lead us each day to this world of strife. Wasn't it easier way back when Do you remember writing with a pen? Kids shooting kids at school Isn't school a learning tool? Bullying is also the trend Whatever happened to being a friend? Maybe if we went back to simpler times There wouldn't be so much crime Maybe if the drugs went away More kids would come out to play. I know I'm just as guilty as all the rest Being without my phone would be a test Is there a right answer, I think not But maybe, just maybe food for thought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/23/2013 12:32:00 PM
Hello Barbara This is a great theme both topical and universal. Your writing touches a chord with me. Well done>
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Date: 12/17/2013 11:08:00 AM
I'm 84 years of age and I think about what you say constantly. Congrats on this good stuff being selected. daver
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Date: 12/17/2013 10:08:00 AM
Hello Barbara... I love your poem, you choose the words very well to our time we live in...it is very true. Congratulation on your featured poem.... God Bless ... Ellie, xoxoxo
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Date: 12/12/2013 1:53:00 AM
I like your writing in this one. Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:41:00 AM
Thank you for all the wonderful comments. I live in Hawaii and have been married for 38 years,,I have 2 wonderful kids who have made wonderful lives for their selves. I've always written poems but usually personal ones to put in greeting cards. My grandfather was a beautiful poet and I truly believe he has passed his wonderful gift on to me. My poems never take long to write. They just happen, I'm loving this new side of me. Once again thank you for your kind words.
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Date: 11/28/2013 7:34:00 PM
Barbra, life seems all corrupt no matter how one views it.. Strong poem... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2013 9:39:00 AM
I love the art and your point view though it reminds me somewhere in the bible that never say the former days were better than the later... I honestly love your first poem wanted to welcome in love with a challenge to PS a family that loves you to the roots
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Date: 11/28/2013 4:25:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Barbra ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 8:20:00 PM
Hi Barbra, this is deep, and i like how you took this one and described how tragic life is...,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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