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Life Sucks

Life sucks. Plucks you from your mother's belly Weans, silks your skin, Fondly toys with you and grows you. Life sucks. Slyly beguiles you To mate, create, Spit out your genes. In moments of sin or folly. Life sucks. Soon, too soon, it pounces. And plays a while, Scratches out your eyes, Crumples your bones. Life Sucks. Finally tiring of you Life licks out your soul With greedy slurps, Smacks its lips, then burps!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/24/2013 12:09:00 AM
hi Delphine , , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2013 12:35:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Delphine ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2013 12:30:00 PM
wow, Delphine... wow... awesome, expressive. . ., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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