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Life Sabotage

I am the muteness behind naivete Born as the duplication of despair, flunked A demented soul An impaired self of bureaucracy Jaded at the tip of shadow Above it stood the gray Quietly stabbed the main arterial venous of the real life chemistry Sneaking low to a shallow sac of each personal sense Like a deadly poison, odorless nor tasteless The fall gradually buried in faint Dejected Lonesome Lost images, abstained lite Living as the reality of achromatic which yet spurred Speaking of the colorless Speak to the life with no magic The life which got sucked by the spell of affliction Beneath the autism of a blur Life decayed when the magic got sealed Illumination shriek within the cavity of its dull voice Speaking of the somber Speak to the life with no magic ************************************************************* Honorable Mention Life with no magic Free Poetry Contest Sponsor Sandy Ivy D

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Date: 12/15/2012 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Yanny love xx
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Date: 12/15/2012 12:28:00 AM
I see you worked hard on this poem, yanny. congrats on your win. you very well created the mood of the contest idea.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 12:50:00 AM
Hey Andrea, I've tried my best in here :D, thank you for your supports through my poetry :D - hug, Yanny
Date: 12/14/2012 8:43:00 PM
Yanny, Congratulations with your lovely deep win enjoyed the imagery. Goodnight :-) LINDA
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/15/2012 12:47:00 AM
Thanks Linda it's really pleasure to know that you enjoyed it as well :D - hug, Yanny
Date: 12/14/2012 6:43:00 PM
thank you' Sandy
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:20:00 PM
Thanks Sandy, your contest is really inspired me :D
Date: 12/9/2012 8:00:00 AM
Oh I love this fav line [Born as the duplication of despair] Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:19:00 PM
That's my fav line too :D
Date: 12/8/2012 10:11:00 PM
beautiful piece you've written! this is the first i have read of you and i love it! hope to read more. such thoughts you express... -JuliMichelle
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:18:00 PM
Thanks Jull, your present is really uplifting :D
Date: 12/8/2012 11:12:00 AM
Beautifully written and expressed.. hugs Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/14/2012 10:15:00 PM
Thanks Michael, happy holiday :D
Date: 12/7/2012 9:44:00 PM
This is very good and I wish you luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/7/2012 10:01:00 PM
Thank's Luci, your visit is really uplifting :)
Date: 12/7/2012 6:57:00 PM
Well done Yanny, I really like this poem, you have captured the sadness and emotion. I am pleased I am the first to comment. Good luck in the contest.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/7/2012 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, i'm glad that you like it :D

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