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Life Opening Up

When life begins to open up Relieving you of all tribulations Blood circulating in free zone Like rivers at night Doing it with affection As they feed oceans without complain From spring to summer, autumn to winter, Taking along all love messages day and night To make the ocean great city of compassion That preserves all good memories, Throwing bad ones to the oceanfront When life begins to open up Lighting up the self in you And rejuvenate mysteries of ancient times That washed emptiness in people To make the journey pleasant adventure Like in the Garden of Eden, When nature gave birth to beauty and hapiness When life begins to open up Encircling you with guardian Angels To halt every intruder, For you to find peace in your kingdom, Like creatures living on the ocean floor

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Date: 9/11/2014 5:55:00 AM
"When life begins to open up Encircling you with guardian Angels To halt every intruder, For you to find peace in your kingdom"..I especially enjoyed these lines..If a person is born again they come into the kingdom and are heirs and joint heirs with Christ..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your wonderful comment... Lekau
Date: 7/23/2014 1:36:00 AM
Greetings Lekau, An outstanding poem... Imagery is magnificent. Well done! Verlena
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Date: 7/23/2014 1:48:00 AM
Hi Verlena, Thank your for your wonderful comment, I appreciate it,... Lekau
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Lekau Mamabolo
Date: 7/23/2014 1:43:00 AM
Hi Theresa, Thank you for your wonderful and inspiring comment on my poem, I appreciate it... Lekau
Date: 7/22/2014 7:55:00 AM
Hi Lekau, A wonderful poem. You have an insightful mind that creates imaginative imagery. Well done, Theresa xx
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Date: 7/23/2014 1:51:00 AM
Hi Theresa, Thank you for wonderful and inspiring comment on my poem, I appreciate it... Lekau

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