Get Your Premium Membership

Life On the River Bar

I was down on my luck... as so many are now. I wanted to bounce back... but didn't know how. I'd lost my job... was too proud to go home. So I camped on a river bar... a place I called home. It wasn't so bad... it could have been worse... what happened next one couldn't rehearse. I'd packed up my stuff and hid it away, while I went looking for work... which took most of the day. Upon my return...to my horror I found, all of my stuff was just thrown all around. My sleeping bag and tent had been slashed with a knife... so were my clothes... that just didn't seem right. Holes were shot through my canned goods... my pans were destroyed... I had now hit rock bottom...falling deep in a void. Even though I'm a man... I just sat down on the rocks... crying up to the heavens... I felt so empty and lost. I must have been heard... cause the next thing I knew... I picked myself up...my hope was renewed. I found some old plastic... which kept me dry for the night. Defeat no longer held me...I was ready to fight. I got a new job...got back up on my feet... this is one time... I hope never to repeat. P.R.Deremer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/3/2015 10:20:00 AM
Great poem. Long ago I was down like that myself, was not easy but I fought my way back.A7
Login to Reply
Deremer Avatar
Pam Deremer
Date: 9/3/2015 1:18:00 PM
Thank you for your comment.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things