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Life On the Farm

Sitting on the hay I see the animals play What a gorgeous day

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/12/2009 5:33:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, Did YOU grow up on a farm ?After Reading this it would be hard to convince me other wise The content perfectly describes The Title I am putting YOU in my Favorite POETs file LOVE YOU...HG

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/12/2009 2:26:00 PM

Nice rhyming haiku, loved the imagery...keep it up...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/8/2009 8:48:00 PM

Awesome haiku, Elizabeth. I love how you made it rhyme! Love, Robin

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/8/2009 6:23:00 PM

Takes me back to the farm I grew up on...loved it!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/8/2009 3:44:00 PM

I have a few of those and I love to watch them play! Laura :)

Date: 2/8/2009 3:36:00 PM

I grew up in a small rural town in central Minnesota and can remember times like this on relatives' farms. Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Thanks also for your kind words on my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen