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Life of Pain

Here we go, The pains back again. So what do I do, Grab the paper and pen. I want to talk, But where do I start. All I have is this pain in my heart. I have fought with my mom. And dad hit the bricks. Now I live in agony, And the pain never quits. My uncle died while I was trying to save his life. Having to watch his children's tears, Haunts me every night. Nothing ever happens. At least nothing good. When your life is filled with pain, You can't expect it would. I usually deal with this pain, "All on my own". now I share some of it, With you through this poem...

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Date: 2/25/2016 9:56:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:25:00 PM
Sharing can be a very good way of easing your pain... I hope you find some solace my friend. This is very well written with a fine cadence and great rhyming. Well done! Best wishes, Keith... (PS WELCOME TO THE SOUP!)
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Date: 2/24/2016 4:04:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, James - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:21:00 PM
James, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:35:00 PM
James, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:35:00 AM
I like the topic and it was well written. I wish I could find words that work so well.
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