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Life Like a Child

To be a child again, ever fair as flora on treetops roam to dare swaying bough's limbs on a river deep, while night's music blesses your sleep. Innocent those cheeks granting a flare of quarter moon's sheen dipped everywhere. Frolicking up in jackstone rhythm playful kites soar in drifts unbidden-- if they flop downwards, we laugh anew that my inner child regrows, through you. Forgetting gray hairs at seventy- five, your dimpled smiles tell me; I'm alive. (Thoughts of grandfather about his grandson) Relationship Contest, Regina Riddle from Carly Lalion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/29/2014 1:11:00 PM
Carly, Congratulations, on your awesome win.... Love Linda
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:59:00 PM
Congrats so much, very sweet and well written poem!
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:17:00 PM
Big congrats on a fine win!!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 12:45:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Carly. Warmest Regards. Shonima
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:14:00 AM
Hi Carly, huge congratulations on your TOP well-deserved win. Pandita
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:41:00 AM
Aww that is sweet!! Grats on your winner this was great to read :)
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Carly.
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Date: 7/28/2014 4:34:00 AM
Very brilliant write with inspiration, Carly. congrats
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Date: 7/26/2014 3:50:00 PM
Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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