Life Is Sweet In Honey-Hives

The Pollen of my life is sweetened- Passed from bee to bee Friendly flowers form a beacon (My Queen beams humble-ly) I feel alive; so bold inside- Life is sweet in honey-hives! Poppies bloom, a serum soon Beckons forth my Soul to thrive! *Just wondering if anyone can guess to what I am alluding? I will crown thee an astute observer as a prize ;)

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/26/2013 8:12:00 AM

Chan Chan These words flow so nicely and give the reader a nice feeling of sweetness and love. HHHHMM but I don't have an answer so I don't win the crown. < sad face > LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Battle Of Love poem Huggies and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/27/2013 6:22:00 AM

Thank you, always and forever, Sweet Pea <3

Saanvi Dua

Date: 11/8/2013 9:56:00 AM

Nice... Like the connection of a honey - bee hive to life ! Sweet smiles :) :) :) .... Saanvi

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/8/2013 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Saanvi; much appreciated :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/29/2013 4:00:00 PM

Very deep clever write. I give up, I cant figure out what this could be.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/30/2013 8:33:00 AM

lol Thanks, my friend. I wish I could tell you right now, but the hint is in the second stanza, and if you are familiar with some of my other pieces, it may click for you. It's one big metaphor for one small, particular thing ;)