Home » Poems » Bl Devnath » Life Is of Struggle

Life Is of Struggle

ants make their own ways change when needed for living only for few days must live any way educate hears for unity life is of struggle

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 5:30:00 PM

Hi Bl, how are you? i love this poem.... I wonder if ants really struggle to make it here and there... enjoyed...pd

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:38:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. Loved always, bl

Don Johnson

Date: 10/23/2012 3:25:00 PM

life can be pain, intermittent the gain, hell world we are, trapped in our jar, like ants we remain, the masters plan reigns, written in the stars, the truth door ajar, just the same... who to blame, the self yet again, ah hahha... as Bi Devnath writes "Life is of Struggle" Don Johnson

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:39:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. Loved always, bl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/23/2012 2:12:00 PM

The struggle seems to permeate everything bl. If we want to eat there's likely a struggle as you point out.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:39:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. You are absolutely right, my friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2012 1:54:00 PM

Yes, I used to watch ants by my house as a child, watching their industriousness. Some people have to be that way, struggling to survive@

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:41:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. You in look is fine. Loved always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/23/2012 1:39:00 PM

POIGNANT WORDS OF POETRY BL .. THE SECOND VERSE ESPECIALLY REVEALING LUV .. MAGNFICENT WORK .. YES LIFE IS A STRUGGLE AND LOVE IS THE KEY ..

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:41:00 AM

Many thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2012 1:03:00 PM

bl, I'm fascinated by this Haiku form, exciting - "all in one" poem .... lol ... - Yours I like very well. - Well done - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:42:00 AM

Many thanks for reading and reviewing my write. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2012 12:56:00 PM

Yes, life is of struggle..Enjoyed your down to earth Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/25/2012 3:42:00 AM

Many thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl