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Life Is Not Fair

We love - we loes We care - we bruise Life is not fair that what we should learn But never forget to have faith and grow strong

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White Sage

Date: 2/9/2016 7:32:00 AM

Such precious positive poem penned by you Dalia, clever thought and optimistic write

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/11/2016 5:58:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear, I really do appreciate it, hugs / / :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 1/10/2016 4:42:00 PM

Two of the most powerful forces in the universe are Words and Faith and you have displayed both here in this wonderful write.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 6:30:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive, sweet words and for your delightful visit, it's much appreciated, hugs / / :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/27/2015 12:51:00 PM

Such marvelous sentiment... Your first and second lines are so powerful, and your last line is so precious! I might print this and hang it over my bed with your permission! Well done Dalia!! Best wishes, Keith

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/27/2015 12:59:00 PM

Oh my dear I'm do honored , that would be my pleasure ...oh my friend thank u so much for ur sweet sweet and lovely comment , I really do appreciate it , words like yours is what gives me the inspiration to write...I thank you from the bottom of my heart...lot of love and hugs / / :D

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/20/2015 8:04:00 AM

if it were easy, Life would be unappreciated....if it were perfect, all problems would be anticipated....the PURPOSE of Life is for us to grow strong....on the journey of Enlightenment To Find A Heavenly Home....;)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/20/2015 9:29:00 AM

Ur definitely right , we suffer to live and we live to suffer , we have pain so we can know that we still can feel , and in pain sometimes we find pleasure....life is complicated but we love it , we must never lose faith and must never give up we should always find our own way to grow strong....thank you very much my friend for ur amazing feedback I appreciate it and I wish you a merry Christmas....