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Life Is Like a Music

i referred my life to a music. we knows that music has different genres. like ballad, classics,metal,mellows, or even rock. all of these has a meaningful definition. my life has different genres too. sometimes trials, impediments, obstacles, hindrances consequences stiked my life. but see! i’m still here! it’s still me! i’m still alive! sometimes i fall, sometimes i win. well, that’s my life in GOD’S HAND. when i fall, God carry my wings up high. He never leave me when i walk barefooted in the Dark room that full of thorns and suffocated by the Bondage of sins. in music, it needs to compose a Good lyrics and nice beat to make a wonderful song. of course! through the help og musical instrument we can create a perfect music. to play a Good music, it needs to press the right keys and notes to gain the perfect sound or else one wrong move leads to imperfect music and do it again and again until it makes perfect. Like life, even if i stumble and fall, i never surrender. ‘coz i know that God is always there for me to raise me up and walk me until my last breath…

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Date: 3/24/2016 7:11:00 PM
Joan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 7:14:00 PM
Joan, I like every line on your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 11/26/2008 5:23:00 AM
beautifully constructed! i like it!
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Date: 11/19/2008 8:49:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Write from your heart and you will go far. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2008 2:30:00 AM
ok.,,thanks to all who liked my composition..
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Date: 11/9/2008 12:13:00 AM
maganda! you have a very positive veiw of life, indeed God is always with us.
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