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Life is a Song

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*Written using 25 Beatles hit song titles. Revised a bit for 2024 It's been a hard day's night, my love. Tonight, I want to hold your hand and keep you close. Beloved one please, love me, do, for though I'm tired I feel fine. And here's a rose I bought on the way home, from me to you. I'll admit, there's been times I've doubted you. George keeps telling me, "She loves you man, it's evident in the way she looks at you." Yet, like some delusional day tripper, I sometimes feel as though I should just let it be and move on. Oh, I've tried my best to woo you with expensive gifts. In the end, I found this to be true - money can't buy me love. Even still, if I could work eight days a week I'd do what I could to give you what you truly deserve, the best of everything. Sometimes I feel I should just quit this mundane job of mine, maybe become a paperback writer, or perhaps make a living by the sea, sailing to the ocean depths in a yellow submarine. Yet, how could I abandon my love? I've always believed that we can work it out. And I truly feel that all you need is love. It's all that any of us really need in this vain life. Whenever I was tempted to leave and pursue my own selfish ambitions a voice in my head would whisper, 'turn around, get back to where you belong dude and stay put.' Oh dearest one, my lady Madonna, my sweet diva, it seems like only yesterday we walked down the aisle as man and wife. We bought our first little house on a street called Penny lane, do you remember? So many years ago, yet still as fresh in my mind as this morning's news. Yet, something keeps nagging at me, I can't explain it. Like a character in a Beatle's song, yeah, like Eleanor Rigby, I sometimes get down and depressed. Perhaps one day my emotions will gel and it will all come together for me. Ha! Listen to this. During the morning commute, after I bought my ticket to ride, a funny thing happened. I said hello to a gentleman and he said, "goodbye." I replied, "Excuse me sir, I said hello." Again he said, "goodbye." So, there we were back and forth with hello, goodbye, hello, goodbye. All the while the song that was playing in the background was the ballad of John and Yoko. Talk about surreal. But I digress, my love. I think that when all is said and done, relationships just need a little help every now and then. Hey Jude, my bride, the former Judith Woodshire but for two score and six, my Jude, please know this; I will love you with all I am, now and forevermore. And though our journey in life is likely to be a long and winding road, I want to walk it with you. Please, accept this rose as a token of my love, from here and to all eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/13/2024 8:17:00 PM
Wow so clever. Brilliant. I go to Liverpool where they came from as much as I can. Seen the Cavern club. I wonder what they have said about this?. Pete.
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Date: 3/9/2024 10:33:00 AM
You do this sort of thing very well, Tom...and thanks for the memories.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2024 12:42:00 PM
Much thx
Date: 2/2/2024 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful write! Belated congratulations
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
Much thx karen
Date: 2/2/2024 5:14:00 PM
Dear Tom, I admire your use of Beatles song titles in your romantic narrative. The pacing of the titles was perfect and worked so well within the scheme of your fun and creative poem. A wonderful introspection and love story. Lots of memories in these titles.. Warmest wishes.. ~Suze
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
This isn't one of my faves but the narration worked well, I think. Much appreciated
Date: 2/2/2024 11:00:00 AM
WoW..I love.this from beginning to end..and So nice to put a voice to your writing..Lovely & Romantic...I love The Beatles.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/2/2024 2:37:00 PM
Thx for commenting again :)
Date: 1/23/2024 12:32:00 AM
My Carrying A Torch is about Van the Man but I like the soothing sound of your Beatles. I wonder did those guys watch The Klingons?
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/26/2024 1:51:00 PM
Indubitably
Date: 1/20/2024 11:32:00 AM
Tom Tom. Hi. Your execution in its entirety incorporating music and songs is marvelous and always a great exercise. It was your execution that puts everything together in poetic fashion. I very much enjoyed your title to which life is a song at that. Be very proud of your work before us. And yes, what a great touch that you recorded this which makes it an added bonus to your readers. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/20/2024 1:00:00 PM
Much appreciated u visiting my space Lisa
Date: 1/19/2024 10:33:00 AM
What a fun tribute to the Beatles all wrapped up in a romantic story! Hope she took your rose! Very creative and clever, Tom. Blessings!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/19/2024 3:33:00 PM
Thx Sammi
Date: 1/15/2024 7:45:00 AM
Wow that's a very creative write with so many Beatles' song titles.. you are so good at story-telling and making it flow so well!
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 1/16/2024 2:52:00 AM
Thanks.. always a pleasure to read your work Tom!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2024 3:01:00 PM
Hello Ayesha. Good to see ya
Date: 1/15/2024 5:48:00 AM
Brings back a lot of memories. This was very well done Tom. I also enjoyed the tongue and cheek narration. This is so much fun.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2024 5:49:00 AM
Hey thx Rick
Date: 1/14/2024 7:51:00 PM
Oh wow, this is absolutely a creative write and I really love how you've included The Beatles songs ahhh, that made it such an intriguing read..Painted such a musical ambience throughout these words and I'm in awe of how ingeniously you thought of this artistic idea..I can almost hear this narrative in my mind, with songs playing and instances unfolding..From beginning to finish, this was truly so beautiful to read, with emotions and storyline, everything well aligned! Congratulations on the win
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Date: 1/14/2024 6:58:00 PM
I love the way you've put a voice to your poem,a very soothing voice.I am a Beatles' fan so I loved this, and found it very sweet.Lovelt,just lovely, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/14/2024 7:03:00 PM
Yes, my real voice. Thx much Charmaine
Date: 1/13/2024 6:34:00 PM
Wonderful write,Tommy, the voice made it nicer to enjoy.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 8:22:00 PM
Hey glad you listened in. Thx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beatle Mania. "Thank you, John" --as Yoko would say! Have a nice day
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 11:54:00 AM
Not a win but happy to be included. Thx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:30:00 AM
Good job! Ob-La-Di, Ob-La-Da, my friend, Bob
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 11:54:00 AM
Obla bloody di. Thx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:22:00 AM
Though I'm not a huge fan of the Beatles, writes like this one are really fun to read. An exceptional job, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 11:53:00 AM
To be honest I'm not either but it was interesting to create and fun to narrate
Date: 1/13/2024 6:35:00 AM
Dear Tomsz, I absolutely love this! And ever since i read this i keep singing “ hey jude” how creative and heartfelt is this narrative , and your use of so many song titles making it seem like all of them fit in this brilliant musical write: i have been to the beatles museum too and i think theres only few that wouldnt like beatles really! Clever and and last lines so beautiful and touching. You are so good at storytelling! This woule have scored even higher if the prompt was included: congratulations
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/13/2024 6:44:00 AM
Check soupmail tomsz
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 6:44:00 AM
Ahh, I looked over again. Should have put life is a song in the narrative. Rules! Lol
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 6:43:00 AM
Thx Inky. The prompt? What did I miss?
Date: 1/11/2024 1:26:00 PM
Fun read. I recall past contests where we had to use titles from either our own poems or from bands, etc.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/11/2024 2:19:00 PM
Thx Andrea
Date: 1/10/2024 6:29:00 AM
Nice drops and in weaving here, to go with creative and loving sentiment to show your love.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/10/2024 6:40:00 AM
I'm just a simple storyteller Jude. Thanks for visit. Much appreciated
Date: 1/9/2024 12:45:00 PM
Creative and excellent poem, Tom! We all need your creative ability and acute sense of dedication amid life's fluctuations. Your ability to fluidly mix song titles into intriguing poetry reveals excellent skills, BOL, with the contest, and thanks for your comment on my page.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 1:40:00 PM
Yessir and much thx
Date: 1/9/2024 7:51:00 AM
Creative way to go. Life is a song after all. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 1:39:00 PM
Thx and yes'm
Date: 1/9/2024 6:48:00 AM
The Beatles were always a favorite of mine. You did very well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 1:39:00 PM
Thx Vic
Date: 1/9/2024 2:02:00 AM
I loved the Beatles, especially the song Hey Jude. What a great imagination you have, so clever to weave all the titles into a lovely narrative. Great work Tommy.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 5:55:00 AM
Thanks Maria. Yep, that's the real Woody
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Maria Williams
Date: 1/9/2024 2:03:00 AM
Oh and I loved your narration as well.
Date: 1/8/2024 10:56:00 PM
This put a real smile on my face, Tom. The hello-goodbye part is really cleaver (and cute). It nice to be able to put a voice on the face. Your kindness is present, with maybe a little more aw-shucks-gee-whiz-ness that I would have imagined. It's nice to know. Cheers, Bob
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 5:56:00 AM
In the end, I'm just a regular fella. Thx for visit Bob
Date: 1/8/2024 6:02:00 PM
lol you took this one out of the ball park. I love the Beatles, so many great songs there, and you meshed it beautifully gl in the contest Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/8/2024 7:08:00 PM
Thanks for the kudos
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