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Life Is a Puzzle

LIFE is a PUZZLE His mind TRAVELS to the time home meant a HAVEN. . . She has gone to her REWARD He lays FLOWERS at her grave Traditional Tanka For the Life is a Puzzle Poetry Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/3/2016 7:39:00 AM

Hey woman...I'm glad to thank you for saving my neck with that correction of verb tense...lead/led...Silly me. Rookie mistake. Please...keep an eye out for me whenever you can. I see congrats are in order for this heartfelt sad write. You rock!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/30/2015 6:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Have a very safe and Happy New Year's! Hugs Eve

Michael Tor

Date: 12/30/2015 3:09:00 PM

Heartfelt write. wonderful win! Andrea.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/30/2015 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea! Well and sadly expressed.

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 9:33:00 PM

Nice number one, Andrea.... It does not bother me at all to see you share the spot at all... wink! SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/29/2015 9:23:00 PM

'Congrats Andrea on your placement! Touching! Wish you & your family a prosperous new year!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/29/2015 9:12:00 PM

'Congrats Andrea on your placement! Touching! Wish you & your family a prosperous new year!

John Beam

Date: 12/29/2015 5:13:00 PM

congrats on your win, Andrea

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/29/2015 4:53:00 PM

Wow, there is quite the solution to the problem. I really like this Andrea. Congrats.

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/29/2015 4:47:00 PM

Fantastic Win! Very nice.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2015 2:57:00 PM

Sad but beautiful :-) many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/29/2015 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea.

Daver Austin

Date: 12/27/2015 11:52:00 AM

Sad the empty rooms with only imagination for company. You have pictured the one left behind so well. I get the empty feeling. LOve, daver

James Inman

Date: 12/26/2015 8:19:00 PM

Beautiful piece Andrea, sad and well written.

Skat A

Date: 12/25/2015 4:03:00 PM

Hi Sweet Andrea, this is a deep write, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/24/2015 6:03:00 PM

Such a beautiful melancholic poem, a mood I know well! :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/24/2015 6:01:00 PM

Love it Andrea..Happy Christmas to you and yours. BG

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/24/2015 3:45:00 PM

Sad but beautifully sewn without a seam showing. A Fav!

John Fleming

Date: 12/24/2015 3:03:00 PM

Andrea. Allow me to thank you on this Christmas Eve. You were one of the first people to encourage and support me in attempting to put what I feel into words. I will always think kindly of you for this. A very merry Christmas...And a happy New Year! My very best regards! :) john