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Life In Paradise

I remember this place Where you could feel the sunshine on your face It’s where you can feel the warm breeze And people always say please That is the life in paradise This place is where people are always nice And where there will always be peace It’s even where you wouldn’t have to stress And where you could always be blessed It is the life in paradise I would love to go back there someday Where even kids could always play It was the best time I’ve had And I would be glad to go back Now that is the life in paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/23/2016 10:46:00 PM
Harmony Pleas, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/22/2016 11:07:00 PM
Good Job Bud.. Can't wait for more :)
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Date: 6/17/2016 5:38:00 PM
WOW! not bad for your first poem. I really like it. Keep writing and inspiring us :-) Good Job Harmony!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/16/2016 11:37:00 PM
Wow, I love your first post.... Perfect... Welcome aboard. Skat
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