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Life In Cyprus 2

We've got flowers and trees and Bees that sting and quite a few other creepy crawly things, We got rocks and weeds,a little waterfall, And a nice place to sit and view it all. Am I homesick for England? Not one bit, I'm here until God says it's time to quit! © Dave Timperley April 2015

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Che Fontana

Date: 5/4/2015 7:52:00 AM

Oh, my God, Dave Now I see you're in Cyprus. I've just left this country, jobless and homeless. And God knows how much I wanted to befriend people like you. In what concerns the poem... sad, true, frank, with that metaphysical twist at/in the end. You built up a heavenly peace to deliver 'this is the end, my friend', and to frame yourself in this so 'ordinary' picture. My friendly hug, Dave. Proud to know you

Dave Timperley
Date: 5/4/2015 10:44:00 AM

Hi Che, this little ditty came from one line from a friend. ''Don't you miss UK?'' I wrote it quicker than it took to read it! Glad you like , from your comment! God Bless. D.