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an old lady walks all alone her legs are so tired but her face so happy . . . for at last she has found this dreamy place of her long past memories oh, painted daisy she recalls gathering bouquets of them under a perfect blue sky she listens to the cool stream babbling on the way to somewhere . . . the weeping willow still hangs her head over the water and the blue jay is still singing from a overhanging tree a welcome back song . . . so tired, she lays down on the grass closing her ancient eyes, smiling and whispering, life has been divine _____________________ March 18, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/life has been divine Copyright Protected, ID 03- 1440-755-18 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand 1092 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/20/2022 First Place

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Date: 3/21/2022 8:37:00 PM
B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l. ~ a contest winner too, I see! Marking as fave :)
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:11:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the beautiful and the compliment and for the FAV, the ultimate compliment ~Constance
Date: 3/21/2022 12:20:00 PM
A little bit of heaven here on earth Constance. A divine poem. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2022 2:55:00 PM
Connie, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 3/20/2022 12:53:00 PM
And this poem is divine! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/20/2022 1:14:00 PM
JCB, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance
Date: 3/20/2022 5:08:00 AM
"life has been divine" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/20/2022 7:55:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

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