Life Cycles

First intent of a Quatern poem Closing and ending life cycles Persons arrive and leave our lives Some are destined to be besides The rest of our existences Nothing lasts indefinetely Closing and ending life cycles Appreciate things immensely Fully enjoy hours and minutes Live with a total awareness Conscious of your own surroundings Closing and ending life cycles Keeping in mind unknown endings Life is constant change every day Inexorable leave effects Adding sum of results someday Closing and ending life cycles Nayda Ivette 11-15-2015

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Mary Swingler

Date: 11/21/2015 9:22:00 PM

Thank you for your encouraging word regarding my my haiku poem. I wanted to read some of your poetic writings. You poems are filled with insight and reflection. Your words express a positive attitude. The pattern of your lines creates a rhythmic internal rhyme. Your creative use of repetition evokes a consistent truth. Life embodies change. That same thought is written in Ecclesiastes 3:1-8 I was blessed by reading and reviewing your poem. Thank you for sharing yourself with us.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/22/2015 5:16:00 AM

Thank you very much for your words Mary. Blessings, Nayda.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/15/2015 12:29:00 AM

Hello Nayda, I can see that you've probably written a number of these Quaterns before. This one is most excellent and is both a "7" and a "FAV" in my book. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 12/1/2015 5:55:00 PM

Thank you very much for your feedback Gary. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem.