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Life Becomes Better

giver gives for love in his or her own style if not given he or she remains unhappy until given To whom to be given wants to take in his or her style if the style of both not stuck both they smile in giving and taking on giving and taking life rests no chaos arises there life becomes better sacrifice must be kept ahead on

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Nudershada Cabanes

Date: 10/9/2014 2:47:00 AM

The giving and taking must be enjoyed by both the giver and the receiver. Life will be happier and better. Lovely poem...

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/9/2014 8:09:00 AM

Many thanks for visiting my page and for your comment, my lovely poetess friend. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2014 4:18:00 PM

This is very good and deep, BL, here I am trying to find that one poem you wanted me to read... Please give me the title.. :) Love Linda

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/9/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thanks my best friend for reading my poem and for your comment. Loved always, my *friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2014 12:31:00 PM

- There can not be beauty, trust or confidence between a man and a woman if they do not live in truth - Lovely written dear friend Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/7/2014 12:36:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the essence you have put here. My lovely friend of always. Loved always,bl

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/7/2014 8:35:00 AM

No chaos arises but all we creat.

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/7/2014 9:23:00 AM

It's true that we create but due to our sentiment. If there's no complain in giving and taking, means sentiment is not there and it's calm. I feel so. Thanks my poet friend. Loved always,bl

Bl Devnath
Date: 10/7/2014 9:18:00 AM

Thanks my poet friend for your comment. Loved always,bl