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Life and Death

Triple Tetractys - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper bleed for you intensely can’t cry enough death seems too close to mend a broken soul life seems too far to reach your pure essence can’t die enough self-pity lives in me I thirst for your laughter and crave your touch death seems too final and life seems too long Syllable Count: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, ~ 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, ~ 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 Syllables Checked: howmanysyllables.com Date Written: July 8, 2016

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Date: 7/15/2016 9:20:00 AM
Full of emotion this one is. Congrats on your heart felt write, Laura.
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Date: 7/14/2016 3:10:00 PM
Laura, your lovely poem bends in diverse directions of life and death. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:31:00 PM
Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest, Laura, perfect form and wonderful poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2016 3:08:00 PM
YAY! thank you sweet lady you are sweet :)-luloo
Date: 7/14/2016 10:51:00 AM
Awesome ..Like name like poem
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Date: 7/9/2016 10:10:00 PM
Great job displaying emotional depth within limited syllables. You go! CayCay
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