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Life Across Two Sides

I saw her down the street Her brown eyes arresting me I stood startled; She hid behind Her pig-tail was a giveaway Her handprint on the wall; a consolation of innocence I walked to her; She looked down at her muddy feet,peeping toenails My sneakers disrupting her sight My ripped jeans mocked her My silence agonised her She saw me; I looked down My thoughts ran in utter chaos Her eyes asked a question Her ears heard no answer Her purple knee caught me The drying bruise worried me The hurrying world broke the silence A call to work dragged us from our reverie The piled rock-hill hid her from my sight and curious pairs of peering eyes had me rush for cover We were the same,yet I was reduced to her rags Her mute pull stunned my mind My rebellious conscious put to rest We stood aside Life across two sides

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/12/2016 8:48:00 PM
Ankitha Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/10/2016 7:17:00 PM
Ankitha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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