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Life - the Hub

Over the years of enacting roles varied Daughter, sister, wife, mother flurried No panacea, this strife Bout of cancer, rife And it take Life! I did ache Listen to the fife Approaching to kill, a knife Ruthless and scary, I was buried Over the years of enacting roles varied © Nadiya(09 Feb '15) * Placed 1st in the contest 'What life means to me' by Jerry Curtis on 10 March 2015 Placed 10th in the contest 'An invented form' by Andrea Dietrich on 23 Feb 2015

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Date: 2/27/2015 10:44:00 PM
Poesy, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:17:00 AM
thank you friend... nad
Date: 2/24/2015 1:16:00 AM
Lovely write poesy,, congrats on ur fine win!
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr.Upma... nad
Date: 2/23/2015 7:05:00 PM
Hi Nad, your poem conveys so much emotion. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra... appreciate your visits on my poems.. nad
Date: 2/23/2015 8:31:00 AM
Congrats on top 10 finish.
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Richard... your visits are appreciated.. nad
Date: 2/23/2015 7:53:00 AM
Intense and emotional, well done on your entry and placement!
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Cas.. nad
Date: 2/23/2015 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations Nad.Love my dear friend.
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Rajat, my ever supportive friend.. nad
Date: 2/23/2015 2:25:00 AM
I love your take on the theme Nadiya - wow how our roles change from birth to death :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan.. hugs,nad
Date: 2/23/2015 1:15:00 AM
this poem was emotive and interesting to read. Congrats for your win. i prefer that a phrase like 'and it take,' however, use the correct form "takes". Really loved the way the poem conveys life's stress!
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Date: 2/24/2015 6:35:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea for the contest.. trying to perfect the rhyme i guess i made that mistake:) ... glad that you liked my pen... nad
Date: 2/9/2015 11:55:00 PM
I like this work...it's full of angst, regret and bitterness from real life....love it! ....Peter
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Date: 2/10/2015 12:51:00 AM
Thank you Peter... glad that you like... nad!
Date: 2/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
Wow very impressive poem its a 7 from me
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Date: 2/9/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thank you Janet for the read and lovely words... nad!
Date: 2/9/2015 9:43:00 AM
You have done very well with this new form, Nadiya! The theme you chose has served you excellently...the content makes one ponder. #7 // paul
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Date: 2/9/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul... it is challenging... thanks to Andrea for coming up with this topic.
Date: 2/9/2015 7:25:00 AM
Amazingly impressive, deeply profound, dear Nadiya!
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Date: 2/9/2015 7:43:00 AM
Thank you very much my poet friend.
Date: 2/9/2015 7:15:00 AM
wow hourglass
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Date: 2/9/2015 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Rajat:))
Date: 2/9/2015 6:45:00 AM
- Impressive poem - a woow poem, dear Nadiya !!! - Well done and good luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2015 6:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise, nice of you to read and comment. lov, nad!

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