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I was once sought to be cool in life but now I wish it was all my sight And now there is no light for me to follow So where will I go in life will I awake and this would all be gone Or will I stay asleep and fall in my own sorrow Will they be forgiven for there sins or will they grow and sill become a larger than life figure And begin to pound me into the ground But it went all away when i awoke because I want to be just

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Date: 1/15/2016 4:16:00 PM
Hunter,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs.. SKAT
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Hunter Anderson
Date: 1/19/2016 11:35:00 AM
thanks Skat I am delighted to be your friend

Book: Shattered Sighs