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Life

Everyday is like a beginning of a new life New hardships and opportunities waiting for me They overshadow me Make me their slave, grab me in the shackles of this hypocritical world But I make myself strong, strong enough to fight and pursue my dreams I ignored all the delights that might be making me weak Stopped praying for them who never bothered to look back at me Now life has become a beautiful tale Better than the time when I had so many people with me but who were actually not with me Life is like a clay, you can make it beautiful or worse as you please Remember those who remember you and don't waste your life finding someone to make it beautiful rather you can be that someone and make it worth living Live for yourself, don't live for others When you start living for others you find your life come to a horrific end....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 6:08:00 PM
Gurleen, Congratulations on getting the placement your poem did not get the first time... LINDA
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:43:00 PM
GURLEEN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Gurleen Kaur
Date: 4/16/2015 4:41:00 AM
Hi!! Thanks for welcoming me.... I started writing like a month ago , I wrote 3 poems till now and working on the 4th one and I'm 16 year old girl....
Date: 4/11/2015 3:06:00 PM
Gurleen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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