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Night moves over ocean Vapor trails the sky The moon sets full then cuts in half and stars fill the night The forest is kissed by the poring rain and the smell brings me back to from where I came.

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Date: 2/28/2016 9:23:00 AM
SHANE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:18:00 PM
Shane Smith, enjoyed reading your poem. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 4/17/2014 8:19:00 AM
Stunning images here! This is an imagist poem at its finest.
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:40:00 AM
Oh wow! Thank you for that. Glad you liked it. I have only just joined yesterday so this is new to me as well. Really appreciate your feedback ;-)
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Date: 4/13/2014 9:20:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Very well written. I am new to PoetrySoup. Find myself reading others poem and it is truly a joy. I found MY new home!!
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Shane Smith
Date: 4/14/2014 12:47:00 AM
Just found the reply button da!!

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