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Life Hard Strife Stay alive Need of advice To survive this night Born in this world of crime. Fear, obstacle of progress Adhere and surpass digression I took every chance not to question “The lesson,’ said Death, ‘Is knowledge, with use” The knowledgeable fear application Those who aren't fearful are dull-witted This may seem like hostile intent To comprehend the simple. Individually I took Death’s advice Changed lives and mine True to this. Compassion, Love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/4/2014 6:53:00 PM
Nate, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/4/2014 5:47:00 PM
Thank you all for the welcome, I will be sure to post more, and check your works out! :) -Nathan-
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Date: 1/4/2014 6:55:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Nate ! - A very nice written poem !! :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2014 9:20:00 PM
WOW, this looks like a double Etheree, Nate, I like how you took it from LIFE to LOVE.... Very deep, for a first poem... ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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