Life

Life, a shaking boat in the ocean of living.... you alone can handle it. when the shakes becomes overwhelming... give some one your paddles... and you end up up side down in the ocean of living....

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Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 2:03:00 PM

love the way you end the poem. SKAT

Innocent Ododo
Date: 6/27/2020 2:03:00 PM

Thanks. I am grateful. Sorry for the late response.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 7:55:00 AM

So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Innocent. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Innocent Ododo
Date: 6/27/2020 2:02:00 PM

I am grateful. Sorry for the late reply.

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/29/2011 2:47:00 PM

intriguing write i like this. good poem

Innocent Ododo
Date: 6/27/2020 2:00:00 PM

Thanks, with a lots of smile. Sorry this is coming this late. I am back here.