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Life

It is an ocean through which we swim It is a glass of nectar filled up to the brim It is a lesson taught by the Lord Beware, it's fragile yet as strong as a sword These days man underestimate its worth Many people die without their dreams fulfilled so fulfill your dreams from birth It beholds many bounties that are hidden from you To see these wonders needed, is a different point of view If you follow your dreams and use your mind peace and the meaning of life you will find

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/15/2010 9:37:00 AM
Great write! I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:26:00 PM
Thank you for your nice feedback!
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:06:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Krishna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:10:00 PM
Hi krishna.I like your view of life expressed here and the diifferent descriptive lines you've used..And your message is true and very inspirational.I have no real dreams now.But no regrets either,for have managed to understand and find peace within, if not ny handling of my life would be very different.These words of yours come from your heart and I want to thank you for sharing them with us.Love June(Sylvia)
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:12:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 12/12/2010 2:32:00 PM
Very creative anf interesting write on life, Krishna
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