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Life is a Battle,life ia a game Where every opponent,has their own name Everyone's trying to be their best Preparing themselves for god's test We all have the answers, there in your head Your body and thoughts,put you to bed You have to be happy, to see yor soul When you do this, your life will be whole Kids are the answer, this much is true They are all angels, talking to you I know the answer, I figured it out Talk to your children, there is no doubt They have all the answers, and need our attention They glisten like angels, did I forget to mention Shirley Willson

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Date: 2/15/2010 11:23:00 AM
and one more thing i have to say on this one i have never thought of life as a battle where other people are my opponents but it is so so true thanks for opening me up to that point of view! =)jo
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:07:00 AM
this is a lovely write and so true! oh to have the blinding faith of a child. when you are young your glass is so small it is always filled, as you get older your glass gets bigger and it takes more to fill it, i got that off a movie lol but thats what your poem says to me. =)
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Date: 2/11/2010 3:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shirley. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:55:00 AM
Delightful reflection on the joy children bring to us, Shirley. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I look forward to seeing more of your work. Best wishes, Carolyn
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