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23.04.2024
The Life Acrostic Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Matt Caliri

Less chaos, focus on what actually matters I scan the mirror to check if everything is all right from the life experienced on the sidelines Embrace, the moon that shines as a beacon tonight

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Valsa George

Date: 5/3/2024 9:16:00 AM

Beautiful and edifying thoughts, dear Anne. We keep worrying over trivialities and spoil our life. Instead, focus on what really matters. Great advice! All the Best dear friend. Have a great weekend. Love and hugs !

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/29/2024 3:24:00 AM

"embrace the moon that shines as a beacon of light", wonderful penning and advise dear poetess..

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/26/2024 12:32:00 AM

This has a great glow Anne-lise.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2024 10:27:00 PM

A nice one. I like how you inserted some rhyme as well

Paul Bell

Date: 4/24/2024 6:10:00 AM

Never scan the mirror in the morning, it lies to you. The moon you can embrace anytime, though maybe not at four in the morning in the woods.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/23/2024 10:14:00 PM

Embrace the moon.. yes, how beautiful is that last line, i think many would resonate… and you’ve written on life an acrostic that is stunning with a picture that goes so well with the write! Absolute pleasure reading this! Sending you always light dear anne Lise

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/23/2024 4:32:00 PM

a delightful Acrostic, Anne-Lise, one filled with simple wisdom....less chaos for sure and more embracing the moon and its hope-filled beacon of life. Well done. Enjoyed your words. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/23/2024 3:19:00 PM

Pithy write! Life is life, as you have written: focus on what actually matters. Take it easy and simple. Have a nice time dear lovely Anne-Lise ~ AA

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/23/2024 1:36:00 PM

Exactly! I have had a lot of chaos in life. Time for less ! Great acrostic and a Fave for me :) hugs.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/23/2024 12:15:00 PM

A wonderful poem on how, amid all the noise and distraction, one must remember what matters most. It stresses the significance of making time for the small pleasures in life and savoring the peace and beauty they provide. My best wishes for the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2024 12:37:00 PM